I was there with you and Tomas. You are a very visual and edgy writer. I liked this piece. I like your literary voice. Keep up the good work.
I really liked your style of writing. Keep it up!
I loved your other stories, but I would have preferred this one to have changed the tense of the action. A little dialogue would have worked for me. Now understand I am still hard and my cock did enjoy this very much.
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Very hot, imaginative and literate
I was there with you and Tomas. You are a very visual and edgy writer. I liked this piece. I like your literary voice. Keep up the good work.
Great style
I really liked your style of writing. Keep it up!
Why not Me
I loved your other stories, but I would have preferred this one to have changed the tense of the action. A little dialogue would have worked for me. Now understand I am still hard and my cock did enjoy this very much.
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