The ending actually begs for a sequal. Was wifey simply "converted," or did she plan this together with "Daddy?" What's in store for the heroinne of this little tale, next time? This is a good start, but where will it go?
I love a good mind fuck. That is what erotica is to me. Hopefully, I will improve my skills and turn a few people on. If you ever have any suggestions on how I can grow as a writer, drop me a line.