Can't wait for more...Hope you don't make us wait so long for another chapter...you and Trish are still number ONE!!! to read...
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Anonymous08/09/05
Glad to see you back!
Been waiting a while for this installment, glad to have you "back". And while it was pretty tame for you, I look forward to seeing what will happen on the cruise! Can't wait the next chapters!
I can't wait for the next part of the story. The new characters add some delicious possibilities, and it will be wonderfully sexy when everyone is underway and naked!
Great to see you writing again! I had been worried that something bad had happened to you! If anything, your descriptions have become even better, and the flow of the story is nicely preserved. Here's looking foreward to many more chapters of these delightful chapters!
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Anonymous08/13/05
loved it
glad to see that checking for a new story from you each time i'm on the site has paid off. your stories are the best i've read. dont make us wait so long next time!
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WOW!!!!
Can't wait for more...Hope you don't make us wait so long for another chapter...you and Trish are still number ONE!!! to read...
Glad to see you back!
Been waiting a while for this installment, glad to have you "back". And while it was pretty tame for you, I look forward to seeing what will happen on the cruise! Can't wait the next chapters!
Happy that you're back!
I can't wait for the next part of the story. The new characters add some delicious possibilities, and it will be wonderfully sexy when everyone is underway and naked!
Top ratings
Great to see you writing again! I had been worried that something bad had happened to you! If anything, your descriptions have become even better, and the flow of the story is nicely preserved. Here's looking foreward to many more chapters of these delightful chapters!
loved it
glad to see that checking for a new story from you each time i'm on the site has paid off. your stories are the best i've read. dont make us wait so long next time!
Perfect
I'm sure you could have wrote a lot more but your hands are otherwise busy heh.
Took you a while for this one but it hit the spot. Not quite as steamy as the others but overall wonderful.
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