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Discovering the Diary Ch. 02

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by Anonymous08/09/05

ENOUGH

THE FIRST TIME OK SECIND TIME NOT GOOD. YOU SHOULD OF JUST LET THE MOTHER CONFRONT THE DAUGHTER AND GET TOGETHER. AND I DON'T MEAN FOR TEA. YOU WRITERS HAVE NO CLUE ON HOW TO GET US READERS ATTENTION. A STORY HAS TO GRAB OUR ATTENTION AND HOLD IT. THIS ONE WAS LUKE WARM. IT HAD VERY FEW HOT SPOTS.

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by Anonymous08/09/05

Oh Dear...

The thermometer was for March 11! I think you should hang up your pen or throw the damn keyboard out the window! Saying that... how old are you REALLY??

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