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An Undeniable Passion Ch. 01

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by Anonymous08/11/05

good good start!

You are one of my newest favorite writers, i like the whole regency era thing going on in this story! I look forward to all your updates!

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by joodle04/17/12

Who is it???

I had issues with this story as opposed to some of your others. I can appreciate a slower start, building anticipation and whatnot, but I would like to know who my leading man is within a few paragraphs or so. None of the male figures sound appealing thus far, so it is hard for me to know what to think. Your story "Lord of the Manor" was so direct. Almost too direct for my tastes, but it still held a certain degree of civility (as crazy as it sounds) and was VERY satisfying overall. I'm looking forward to the next chapter-- I hope I find the leading man!

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