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OH MY GOD! I love you stories & this is an awesome start! You are officialy my new favorite author on the site! Please update before i go insane!! Hurry! Hurry! ~Sparkles~
Excruciatingly boring, I find i cant read on. Maybe i will come back to it another day.
Second or third time... maybe fourth?
I love this series. This is probably my third read, and it is always wonderful. If you are reading and "bored", be assured that there is much passion, etc. to come. This is an amazing series, but like a film, there is sometimes prolonged suspense. Opels, you are an extraordinary writer, and I am a tough critic.
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