All Comments on 'Father of the Bride'

That's lovely ~

very sweet, it's hard for

dad's to give thier daughters

away~ I hope she will be very happy!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

Very sweet of you to share the photo and experience.

A good clear solid verse

it tells a tale;

not some pretensious piece

masked behind babble and garble;

it's a heartfelt image that we see,

of Mom and Dad left to their lives;

as the young go out to experience the same,

and we do it all, all over again........

Congrats.

I've been so emotional lately and this brought it all right out of me.

Thank you!

a different read from the box, touching~

on a rather unusual topic for poetry. Thanks for sharing!

A look at the lighter side of Box. The scene ~ the daughter's wedding ~ Going from joyous to sadness upon returning home to an empty house. Lovely picture sets the mood.

hahaha...cute

that lifes put on us. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thank you.

A good narrative poem. Sentences seem steady, but the emotion goes down and down to the lost.