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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Stop! I'm not on the pill!!

This tired, shopworn line has become irritatingly tiresome. Today's college women are not amazed by the prospect of intercourse and they do not say, "Who knew someone would want this? Go figure!"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great idea but poorly executed

Started off well, ended too abruptly and shit ending... If I wanted to read a love story I'd go on some twilight fan fiction bullshit. This girl had just been fucked reluctantly and sold out by her mate who then happily fucks and falls in love with?

And 'she tasted salty'... who the fuck wants to read that!

Great idea but poorly executed.

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