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ZMP~ hills in the road

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz08/01/05

You've done it again

With rhythmic variance
you make me feel
I'm traveling the road
along with you;
life seen with new vision
with vistas of hills
never ending;
and wondering what
you'll serve up with next

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by Anonymous08/01/05

ever another

mountain to climb...have you ever climbed a mountain and found a rainbow in the dark...just on the other side pointing to the peaks of a higher mountain...like a elfin pot of gold...great one...ole great one...lol/blue

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by Scott N. Leavitt08/02/05

**5**

YES!! I know about roads!!! This is so true!! I see this everyday. But I did not think about this as you say it until now!!! EXCELENT!!! ZMA!!!!!!!

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by ~hellbaby~08/03/05

Filled with hope

I love poems offering light and possibility. Thanks for the mood lifter

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:)

very rhythmically done my friend!
good job!
Kisses,
T

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