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by Orgone5

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
and then...????????

I hate it when a story just stops. This story doesn't end, it just stops. It's fairly clear where this story was going, but go ahead and write the other two or three paragraphs to bring it to conclusion.

-- KVK

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Incomplete

AND Finish story to logical conclusion. This story lead not a next one but finish only.

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