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Would he?

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by Anonymous08/03/05

good one.....

I like how you write: "Here it is, this is how I see it."
It isn't full of fancy words, or way out images that take
an hour or so to figure out, if ever. We are the same
in that we write to our hearts and souls not our IQ's.
I have preach enough, WOULD HE? could loose a few words here
or there, but I found it as hard and life like as the door.
sand

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by RhymeFairy08/03/05

Hard Pressed ~

*Grins*
Ya had to know this one would Shoot off ~!! I love this. You paint the picture, and let us * feel * your indecision .. Nice form too ~

More Please ~

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by LeBroz08/05/05

Her Doom

Great imagery of her standing
at the sacrificial door
the ravages of time and torture impact on it
as she prepares to knock
alluding to so strongly her fated doom within
damn - no wonder they never show
for a second wild night of sin

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