I love your use of the third person rather than a first hand account. It reads more like a short story or novel. Keep up the great work. Of course, I love the erotica and subject matter. Very stimulating. Keep having fun. Hugs, Jenna
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Anonymous05/04/09
Steamy sex
Built to a surprising and satisfying climax.
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Anonymous03/06/10
WANT MORE!!
more more more!! please! so hot.
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Anonymous07/27/10
Nice pace
Good build up before raw sex. Descriptive... Very nice Daisensei! Please continue the series beyond the second part!
English
keep it coming!
hope you don't run out of steam!!!
WOW!~
So Hot! Please write more. You have a great talent!
Awesome loved it
Please continue
Please write more.
Your style of story telling really works for me. Please keep it up.
I love your use of the third person rather than a first hand account. It reads more like a short story or novel. Keep up the great work. Of course, I love the erotica and subject matter. Very stimulating. Keep having fun. Hugs, Jenna
Steamy sex
Built to a surprising and satisfying climax.
WANT MORE!!
more more more!! please! so hot.
Nice pace
Good build up before raw sex. Descriptive... Very nice Daisensei! Please continue the series beyond the second part!
Thanks
That is a dream! Thanks so much! More please!
Love it!!!!!!!!
Why can't more people write more stories like this? I absolutely love this one! I wish we could have more. Must read!
HOT
Very Nice Story...
...And very, very, hot! I have to agree with benny, we do need more stories like this, and hope to see more soon. Thanks for sharing this one!
worked for me
The steam room is where?
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