All Comments on 'Lived Is To Devil as 6323 is to...'

by Ancient117331

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Sweet ~

Think you had a lot on your chest. *Grins*

I like this emotional roller coaster poem.

It reads like a short essay, yet it still * Feels * good.

Liked your Rant like quality too.

Nice Poem here ~

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndealmost 19 years ago
Heh!

Classic IQ. The things we come across when surfing the web...

I loved the way this poem read, the drive behind it and its intent. It's punchy, just on the good side of a rant, and that gives it a good edge.

One thing I felt, at times, was that the poem could have gained a little if it had explored more clearly its list-poetry side. Something to consider, at least.

And it's great to find your poetry again. It's been a while for me. :)

Du LacDu Lacalmost 19 years ago
(~)

This is some excellent work... I loved the flow.. how it ranted through in gentle and roaring cycles. I felt as if I was in your essence and you mine. To me that is good poetry! Thank you for the journey

du lac~

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Sigh, People tend to assume more often than not - sad, because they do it based on themselves and not on the other. My writes are me... If you want a clue - they are there to see. When you DO take the time to read and hear my thoughts behind your eyes... perhaps I won't see...