by Ancient117331
Think you had a lot on your chest. *Grins*
I like this emotional roller coaster poem.
It reads like a short essay, yet it still * Feels * good.
Liked your Rant like quality too.
Nice Poem here ~
Classic IQ. The things we come across when surfing the web...
I loved the way this poem read, the drive behind it and its intent. It's punchy, just on the good side of a rant, and that gives it a good edge.
One thing I felt, at times, was that the poem could have gained a little if it had explored more clearly its list-poetry side. Something to consider, at least.
And it's great to find your poetry again. It's been a while for me. :)
This is some excellent work... I loved the flow.. how it ranted through in gentle and roaring cycles. I felt as if I was in your essence and you mine. To me that is good poetry! Thank you for the journey
du lac~