by Sean Renaud
Nice scene you portrayed, roleplaying the non-consent game is such fun!
Did you ever notice how the comments from the stupid people are always anonymous? Just ignore them. This story was a fun-to-read tale. Was it incredibly original? No, but you don't get that too often here on Literotica. It was pretty well written, though, and I enjoyed it. I hope you had some fun writing it and post some more.
The revelation that it was a fantasy was a bit of a 'gotcha,' but this was a well-written, enjoyable story nonetheless.
That was great! I figured her husband knew about it, and that he was probably there. GREAT! sotry
Wow, let me light a cigarette. Thank you, look forward to more.
times for realism. Then stuff her body in an old blue barrel and send it drifting in a river bottom having put stones in it to pull it down.
the same Anony nicks? Safe, sane, and consensual are the keys to any type of sex play. In this case it was a prearraged deal. Wonder how it would have turned out had all of the actors been drunk before the scene started?
I really liked the end when we found out that her husband was there and she wanted it.
I'm with Angelx602 on this one. I loved the ending. It was so unexpected!
I like the concept but maybe it should have been longer with the husband smacking her ass and having another woman there so that they would have to lick one another forcefully until one of them gets cum in the ass and the other licks it out and share.....
They should have had the husband, in the future, suck on her tits and then realize that milk was in his mouth. She's pregnant!
I rerally liked it.
Nice twist at the end.
Had you posted it in Loving Wives you would have been called all kinds of names, but this story does belong to both categories.
This is the first time i came across a story of yours, i hope it is not the only one.
The story-line as well each sequence is nicely narrated and gripping. The ending of-course is unexpectedly much favored.
not a lot too many men lost in detail and as usual the woman ends up liking it crap realy