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Going for a Swim

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by Anonymous

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by Azuldrgon08/19/05

Tempting

This was a little on the fantastic side, but the adventures are out of this world. Good job on the description and the setup. I thought this was well written and wish this place actually existed.

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by Anonymous08/19/05

wrong person

Would be 100 times better in the 3rd person.

There is nothing worse than reading about your hairless pussy and your breasts when you are male. Remember your readership. At least half are male,. If you are only writing for one person, send them a letter.

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by 11/11/07

Very Hot

Very hot story. Great description and great characters.

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by 11/11/07

Very Hot

Very hot story. Great description and great characters.

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