Incredibly hot and written with exceptional style. It just goes to show that it's O.K. to break the rules of writing if you really know what you're doing. Welcome back!
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Anonymous08/13/05
best story ever
Thank you for writing so poetically, and also so honestly, about this threesome. Your style and details carried me very far and very graphically into the situation, so familiar and so strange and not so strange. You captured so eloquently the role of "honored guest" for a couple and the dynamics of three. Thank you. I hope to see more of your writing.
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Unbelievable!
Incredibly hot and written with exceptional style. It just goes to show that it's O.K. to break the rules of writing if you really know what you're doing. Welcome back!
best story ever
Thank you for writing so poetically, and also so honestly, about this threesome. Your style and details carried me very far and very graphically into the situation, so familiar and so strange and not so strange. You captured so eloquently the role of "honored guest" for a couple and the dynamics of three. Thank you. I hope to see more of your writing.
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