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* Gottta Grin *
Cute ... Terribly Cute.
I did stumble a bit Art. Might have been just me.
BUT ... I love the poem ~!
It had me rolling on da Floor ~!!
Way funny my friend.
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The puff of smoke bellowed way before the boom,
if Jim Bob was shot out, it was faster than a fully clothed eye
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I could just see How fast he flew ...
Loved the thought of the fire engine
and the ca-tats-tro-fee.
Poor ole Jim Bob being Shottt
straight into the air ... What a hoot ~!!
Much More Please ~
Good Humor
Those folks just don't get it,
you can't go from here to there,
leastwise not that way;
so pardon, if I'm busy
with the pussy that's been tree'd,
and then later,
will continue on my journey
to the Vixen Planet, oh so near.
omg your puns are just
outragious...am cheering up already...dreams of people dying is always a downer ...thanks for cheering me up..I love the title too...it was just delightful thanks sweetie for a visit to the wild vixen planet...smiles/blue
Laughing
Very funny Bro, will there be more? I can see you doing a series with this. If you hadnt planned on it, do.
Alby watching
but they wouldn't speak of it?
but they wouldn't (hear) of it. kind of cute. more story than poem. carl
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