A spin-off poem. It ends up making perfect sense, even without its companion piece. There's a definite Bestiary potential here.
Totally neat poem. pussy feet?
I like the way this poem flows.
I have to admit to wanting to read it
again an again. It confused me at first,
then it * Clicked *
Cocky lil poem here ~ * Grins *
of poetic justice here...very nice...thanks.
in blind faith...and tis awesome in appearance...blue
Gurgled crow! Love that!
And the nod to Sandburg-- an excellent little poem that begs to be read several times. Good work, Anna!
this is what you excel at, these little mysteries that have varied solutions.
I am still working on the the title.
It is amazing how you are able to use just a few words to take me on a long and complex journey.
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