All Comments on 'it is rusted I am blind'

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Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeover 18 years ago
Ah!

A spin-off poem. It ends up making perfect sense, even without its companion piece. There's a definite Bestiary potential here.

WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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Totally neat poem. pussy feet?

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
*Ya Got Me *

I like the way this poem flows.

I have to admit to wanting to read it

again an again. It confused me at first,

then it * Clicked *

Cocky lil poem here ~ * Grins *

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
beautiful piece...

of poetic justice here...very nice...thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a poem that clicks..

in blind faith...and tis awesome in appearance...blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

Gurgled crow! Love that!

And the nod to Sandburg-- an excellent little poem that begs to be read several times. Good work, Anna!

Fly

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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this is what you excel at, these little mysteries that have varied solutions.

I am still working on the the title.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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It is amazing how you are able to use just a few words to take me on a long and complex journey.

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