All Comments on 'Fool's Game'

Very amusing, definitely worth a read and a smile.

Yes, there are some forced rhymes, the scheme undergoes some sort of weird mutation once or twice, and the rhythm isn't always perfect, but that doesn't steal anything away from the fun.

What a funny, erotic little poem. Loved how he so artfully sliced her gown to bits. The tongue in cheek erotica here.

breathed warm and moist along her thighs,

the Queen did swoon, with lust filled eyes

and then the Royal Feast began

Guided by bejeweled hands

Nicely done!

comments was quite amusing...blue

This was truly a fun read! In Days of Olde verbage, authentic to the ear and eye to Me, I especially enjoyed the "feast" {and back for seconds} in the last two verses. A different piece than that of the others I read today - and I just loved it!

Vixxx