All Comments on 'No Rescue from a Tumor Ch. 03'

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Jackspeed2uJackspeed2ualmost 5 years ago
Don’t bother.

6 months between chapters the story isn’t advancing at all. Each chapter is JUST THE SAME as the last. Nothing is discovered nothing new is offered, just bullshit on repeat.

After 3 short chapters I know nothing more that what I knew after the first half of chapter 1. What a waste of time.

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