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Moonlight Serenade (Haiku)

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/04/05

awesome

on to use as pillow talk...thanks dear...bluerains

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by LeBroz08/04/05

very nice

very nice, good imagery, and more important, you tickled my curiosity about this thing called Haiku; and the Logical One LOVES learning things new.

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by Anonymous08/04/05

Great atmosphere here

an interesting comment on love and control

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by lil_elvis08/04/05

Beautiful Image

Sitting on the beach, moon over the sea. One of my favorite places to be. Nicely encapsulated.

lil elvis

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by Jennifer C08/05/05

Love this hb

The imagery here is wonderful,
I could hear the crashing of waves
as i read this.
Nicely done,
thanks.
~ Jenn

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