All Comments on '"Bad. So Very Bad."'

Loved it- the tension builds just right!

Spicy line drawing effectively introducing the up-coming text!! Niiize.

Stirred memories

Evocative of times past ~ so well remembered.

So like a soft Dom with an unruly sub who insists on tendering more than just a kiss when she loses control.

tensions.. with graphic details.. mmmmm yummy

Rarely do the subject and the rhythm of a poem so perfectly coincide to arouse me! I find myself desperate to play...but, like a good little bad girl, i must await the return and permission of my Master.

;-)

Truly delightful!!

to enter the realm of body, TK U MLJ LV NV

The rhythmic structure really gave it a flow that captured my mind.

That was really really good...I'm a writer myself, come check me out please:

http://imageteam.org/img-528d4defb100d.html

Thank you.

Very good stuff