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I smile, I cry, I smile

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/13/05

I read

I read and I smiled
I read and I cried
I read and I understood

Thank you for a lovely poem of life
- jacksails54

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by walkingeagle11/08/05

Great Job!

This is very good! Not as erotic as I would prefer, but very good!

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