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I love it!
The playfulness and love in this story is amazing. I really enjoyed it.
Cute!!
This was playful, enjoyable. Like the innocence to it. No third party, no really rough and tumble stuff. This was very nice.
excuse me
....excuse me I need to go find my husband to help me with the dishes. WOnderful!
wow
Without a doubt, that's the best way to wash dishes ! ...lol...
Truly amazing
This is one of the best stories i have ever read, i can relate to the flirtyness and humour. It has the right amount of love to it, the couple have a really strong bond which is such a pleasure to read. I wish i could rate more than top for this one. I take my hat off to you rgraham666, well done!!
a real winner
Loved it RG. Loved the humor, the flirty feel and the humanity you put into the characters.
Excellent, rob.
Nicely done. The characters show depth beyond a simple fuck and kiss. They have something more, and it shows in their behavior and the way the respond to each other. I especially liked the minor things that weren't quite perfect.
Q_C
Fantastic!
I loved the story and I especially liked how you could really tell the characters were simply infatuated with one another. Very nice, and I do agree - that is a terrific way to end a barbeque!
Amazing
There's no point in guessing what number I'm on, but I'm slowing getting through them. Smut? I could raise a disagreement. Again. What you call smut is quite different from my definition. You can do no wrong.
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