I have gone back and read the other stories in the Little Mel series. I think they are quite good. Only 1 criticism; you should really resolve the issue of Mel's married status to that jerk in the first story soon.
writing the Mel stories. They're feel good stories and sometimes that's what we all need. Thank You. Ronnie W.
there should be a part 3 & 4. in part 3 the guy proposes to her and end with the wedding. then in part 4 they have their 1st kid together.
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I have gone back and read the other stories in the Little Mel series. I think they are quite good. Only 1 criticism; you should really resolve the issue of Mel's married status to that jerk in the first story soon.
Don't Stop
writing the Mel stories. They're feel good stories and sometimes that's what we all need. Thank You. Ronnie W.
please continue
there should be a part 3 & 4. in part 3 the guy proposes to her and end with the wedding. then in part 4 they have their 1st kid together.
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