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I'm so glad I found another author who has talent, I hope you write many more stories as good as this one

Hot hot hot!

More please!

Tight

I liked the attempt at writing tightly within the parsmeters and constraints of a well circumscribed plot line. It was a demonstration of attempted sophistication

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This was great. You've actually got some skill at writing, unlike most authors on here. I'd love to see more stories like this one. As in more nonconsent/reluctance. But that's just my thing. lol

Goddamn.

Goddamn. Well written n hot. Good job. Thank u.

I've finally read one of your stories and since this was the earliest, i decided to go with it first. Very well done, BB! Loved your descriptions. I could picture this man with his jet black hair and ice blue eyes very well.

Well...

I really enjoyed this. I'm not sure if I want to see more, or not. I love the story as it is, but think that it could be taken further. :) thanks