This was a pretty good fantasy, but it wasn't as good as it could've been. I thought the action went too quick and it was more of a guy grabs girl, bends her over, cums inside her story. I thought if you would have added a little dialogue to talk about what she was saying and maybe add some lines for him, it would have been better. Like talking about how she was moaning while being dp'ed and such. Hope to read more from you.
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This was a pretty good fantasy, but it wasn't as good as it could've been. I thought the action went too quick and it was more of a guy grabs girl, bends her over, cums inside her story. I thought if you would have added a little dialogue to talk about what she was saying and maybe add some lines for him, it would have been better. Like talking about how she was moaning while being dp'ed and such. Hope to read more from you.
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You're gay bro
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