by annaswirls
I get a visual of a dead man on a rotting ship.
whew, these lines...devastate
"Immobilized, these chains
do not hold him here,
they hold him together."
I am completly mystified by the end line
"Do we peel or layer tonight?"
I feel it could be better, but it is always a pleasure wending through the mysteries
This is a deep work that needs at least 3 readings. Mystical and realistic all in one.
wonderful work
du
Mentioned in the Sunday Reviews
of a fate lost in the comfort zone...going round...and a few other images come to mind...tis a very prolific flash..thanks blue
and I don't get it. Too deep for a shallow mind such as I.
So, I see a cigar store indian with a 'feathered hat'
and a need to move west out of the way of the Spainish
long guns. Tell us about the last line, please. sand