Cool story! Don't let the self appointed "grammer police" get to you is my advice. They only read a story to see how many mistakes they can spot, and ignore the story itself. I thought the story flowed well, and was quite enjoyable
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Cool story! Don't let the self appointed "grammer police" get to you is my advice. They only read a story to see how many mistakes they can spot, and ignore the story itself. I thought the story flowed well, and was quite enjoyable
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