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ZMP ~ little thoughts

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz08/07/05

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A nice little triad
it got me to thinking
there should be more limping....

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by Anonymous08/07/05

Food for thought

These thoughts are not so little. Thank You again, Art. Your ZMP poems always leave me thinking. S~

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by Anonymous08/07/05

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This works right into the realm of the old masters Art. I feel this is one of your best ZMP poems. Stirring both mind, heart and spirit to see more than the self.
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Mentioned in the Sunday reviews

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by quietpoet08/07/05

I am humbled

by the phrases here. This is poetry, the nuance, depth and creativity. I love short form, though I usually write longer, but you have resurrected the desire in me. Thank you. Truly Inspiring!!!

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by bluerains08/07/05

am voting 100 and 10

as QP says so well...this is one of your best...thanks for caring and sharing your heart will others..I still have to read your vixen pen ...tis a long one..I have to be in a certain frame to read those nasty biggies...winks...blue

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by Anonymous08/07/05

stum-bing along

The first one isn't bad but that whole butterfly and caterpillar idea is all over the internet. And it's caterpillar. The last one is hard to constructively comment on. I'm not familiar with "stumbed." Is it suppose to be stumbled or stumped? And the following lines do not work very well: "brains not raised the toe gets stumbed and throbbing" Sorry, but it sounds grammatically wrong and uneducated. Not saying that you are. I'm saying part of this poem comes across as an uneducated piece of writing. With knowledge comes wings.

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by Scott N. Leavitt08/07/05

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I think its a GOOD ZMP!!! I like it alot like all of ZMAS poems!! I had one to say about a boy & a path but I dont remember it now!!

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by Scott N. Leavitt08/09/05

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I rememberd it!! Here is an other little ZEN -

Prepare the child for the path, not the path for the child.

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U08/25/05

last one...

loved the last one in particular! but they are all great as usual!
another great job Arty!
Kisses,
T

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