All Comments on 'Color My Beach'

I love your beach! And it gives this ol' lady hope. You did say Golden Girls, did you not?? I'll be right over... LOL

Thank you, Spike!

I always feel a little sunburned after reading your beach poems which I find very favorable <grin> okay maybe not sunburned but my skin tingles? hehehe

feel the salt...as I reach out for the cooler...I'll pop one just for you...your beach sounds like mine..lovely...blue

great beach poem. good writing. :)

Choice of beverage is ALL wrong,

You need something more full bodied;

deep, deep red and potent

so you'll walk on water

and float on sand

never noticin'

your skin's redder'n the settin' sun

other than that - your verse is perfect

As much as I enjoy a good red wine, it can't compete with a cool longneck when I'm at the beach enjoying its color.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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