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Written with feeling
Reading a lot of stories on Lit, it's quite rare that I come across a story that has it all (for me, that is).
I'm not a literature critic, but just a reader who doesnt mind telling that this story did hit the bulls eye.
Thanks for a great story
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Glad you're back!
Loved the newest story! More, more, more!
KUDO's
You know how good you are, so compliments on the respect that flowed back and forth between them.
Don't be a stranger - thanks with High Regard
Incredible...
Wonderful story, very well done! Very easy to identify with Rory... Thanks for sharing this.
very heartfelt
loved it very much! its very melancholy...
Love the Rain...
Good job Rg. I finally read it...Suz
I'm going to cry now
RG You are awesome. Not just sex, but real emotion. Absolutely beautiful story
A very tender story
which I enjoyed reading - the end was a surprise. Just a comment - can you change from using a blond hair starting with a blow job to some other color such as black, brown, auburn, ginger, red haired and a different sexual activity.
Pity he didn't really acknowledge his son and try to do more for him in some way. Mostly a nice little story and brief love affair brought about by the weather.
Written with heart and understanding
I'm a big fan of the rain, too. It's raining outside right now and I feel the urge to go for a drive. Thanks for the reminder.
Great story
very good story. very believable
IT MUST BE RAINDROPS FALL ON MY HEAD
and how I wish it would rain. TK U MLJ LV NV
Beautifully written
Appropriately, your diner story is rare in its combination of insights into the feelings of the characters as well as the physical sexual acts, and at the same time, very well done. I congratulate you on your ability to get the most out of a rather ordinary situation. Playing with the little boy was an inspired way to end it. Great job!
Bravo!
Nicely done! Could easily be longer, or have a second chapter; husband dies in tornado, rory returns to raise his son... or diner is destroyed, husband dies, stacey and son travel to find rory...
Excellent!
One of the best stories I have read on this site. Very well done. Your plot is believable, and the tale is well-spun. Like any good story, you leave enough unsaid that the reader can form his/her interpretation. The sex could be a little hotter, but it's passionate and loving, and this story is more about emotion and longing than it is about hot sex anyway. A sequel would be awesome, but it appears that unless Stacey's and Rory's family situations suddenly and tragically change, this is going to remain a very special memory for them and nothing more. Five stars.
A missed hole.
The story was very well written and thought out. I would have added him licking and sucking her asshole too. Describing how her scent and taste was after working all day. Probably totally funky and scrumptious as he tongue fucked her anus to orgasm. 5 stars sir.
Every Time It Rains
Being an old softie, this story grabs my heart strings and pulls and tugs them to almost intolerable depths of emotions.
If this story is true, non-fiction, it appears to be one of of great heart-break. It is understandable the waitress, Stacy, wanting a child and being impregnated by a stranger, especially since they had an emotional and love connection. However, she was bound to her community and was not going to leave--regardless!
The story is a unigue theme for a story, maybe not in realty, and is very well written.As an aside, there was no mention of Rory settling his tab for his dinner, night's lodging and breakfast, which doesn't even take into consideration of a very good night of fucking, blowjobs, spooning and love with a beautiful woman!
Great story
Brought back some beautiful memories, each accompanied by heart-wrenching wonderings of might have been.
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