All Comments on 'Play Ball'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
GREAT!

Great story! I hope it is true!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
With feeling

It was a great story with lots of feeling and discription that really puts one in the setting. It is the first of your stories that I have read. It makes me want to read some of the rest of your erotic work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great story

That story brought back memories of summer ball playing.Thank you for bring it to light

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
plain good

Good simple story. I have a friend who had a brace when we were kids. I can relate

ReadsalotReadsalotalmost 16 years ago
Stirring memories of my own

I can identify with Pete's smile. While I didn't have braces, my athletic abilities were never good when I was growing up. I was the kid who was always picked last in any team sport. Having any amount of success was cause for celebration.

Bitter sweet memories, but that is life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

Very nice retelling. Definitely a great look at human spirit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A wonderful story

I remember days on a similarly crude ball field, that alone gives me a warm feeling about your story. The part of it with Pete in it, however, brought tears to my eyes.

*****

auhunter04auhunter04almost 11 years ago
Sad

All the sand lot baseball is gone.

adults had to organize it and drive everyone nuts

Great reminder of yesteryear

Dubby49Dubby49over 8 years ago

What a marvellous story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Great, heartwarming story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Tears in my eyes

The title(of the comment) says it all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Dear Author, Your story was excellent! Thank you for a really fine short story. jntiques

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fun story

I enjoyed the story quite a bit. Found it interesting that British English spelling was used in several places when talking about an American game.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This is what baseball should be.

Boys playing, enjoying, learning teamwork, brotherhood, sportsmanship.

lukeshortlukeshortover 3 years ago
Love of the Game

Those of us who loved baseball and dreamed of playing professional baseball understand the importance of playing for the sake of playing. The old saying "winning isn't important, wanting to is". Winning is more fun than losing. Playing, either winning or losing, is more fun than not playing. This story completely captures that sentiment. 5*

DOC226DOC226over 2 years ago

A short but heart-warming story about the power and beauty of the human spirit. Perfect!

DOC226

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Baseball with no glove or shared,

Soccer no shin guard,

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

drachir53drachir53about 1 year ago

Interesting, most everyone plays to win but what we should remember what is really important is to participate and let everyone on team get into the game, play on field, pinch hit or pinch run. Let everyone play.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Fun_f#>king~tastic! J.A.C.

chytownchytown8 months ago

*****Great piece of story telling. Thanks for sharing.

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