and erotic. Very nice.
I enjoyed tour tale immensely! It's nice to read about 2 people doing the old folks boogie.
and well written especially i might be related to her my last name is the same.lol Pat
Will you please continue with the story i would very much like to read and see how they finish the story ?will they get together and get married and have children? Pat Atlanta,Ga
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Sweet
and erotic.
Very nice.
Nice!
I enjoyed tour tale immensely! It's nice to read about 2 people doing the old folks boogie.
Well Done!
and well written especially i might be related to her my last name is the same.lol
Pat
Continue please
Will you please continue with the story i would very much like to read and see how they finish the story ?will they get together and get married and have children?
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
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