All Comments on 'Big Daddy's Next Lesson'

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thekiwicharmerthekiwicharmerover 18 years ago
HOT

How lucky can 2 horny men get with such a tight and horny babe. Like the spanking of her girl parts, and the fingering of her once virgin ass.Hope that you can find a legal horny female for her to get some pussy licking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yikes!

Wow that was pretty hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nice story

i only had one promblem you never describe the daughter how tall was she, what colour was her hair,what was her eye colour,as well as her bust,waist,and hips.so we can get a mental picture of the hot 18 year old.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wish I'd been broken in like this!!!

Wow - after reading this, I'm so very wet!! What a horny story - and what a lucky girl she was!!! I enjoyed this story more than many on this theme as it isn't all gooey and romantic, but very kinky, dirty, and absolutely matches elements of my own Daddy fantasies!!! I just wish that girl was me being broken in so thoroughly and so satisfyingly!!! I'm waiting for the next installment eagerly

DebauchedDaughterDebauchedDaughterover 18 years ago
Wish I'd been broken in like this!!!

Wow - after reading this, I'm so very wet!! What a horny story - and what a lucky girl she was!!! I enjoyed this story more than many on this theme as it isn't all gooey and romantic, but very kinky, dirty, and absolutely matches elements of my own Daddy fantasies!!! I just wish that girl was me being broken in so thoroughly and so satisfyingly!!! I'm waiting for the next installment eagerly

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More please!

Please continue this story.

meinecmeinecalmost 18 years ago
Damn!!

Please let me know where i can get an uncle and daddy like this

DesertLustDesertLustabout 14 years ago
One of the best

I've never read something so hot. This is a great series. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Every girl needs to be fucked like that by her father and uncles.......

Gemini552Gemini552almost 14 years ago
Dream cum tru

One hot incest story. Fucking great and great fucking. Loved every stroke and suck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Rubbish!

The first part was good. This was just a bunch of crap.

EnchantedGreenEnchantedGreenover 12 years ago
How can you say rubbish???

Seriously, how can you say rubbish?? I guess being anonymous, it's so much easier to be so critical and judgmential insted of encourageing huh?! I thought the story was hotter than hell! Great discriptive writing HotKittySpank. The domination and controlling aspect wasn't over the top and rediculious, it was perfect only adding to the heat of the story. Please, keep up the good work!! And to all those that want to leave negitive comments that are less than helpful at least have the 'chaonies' to regester and leave a name insted of being an anonymous.

Thanks for sharing your story HotKittySpank.

~EnchantedGreen~

marcelammarcelamover 12 years ago
"I want more"

the story was good. It got me all hot. Part 3, mmmmmmm delicioso!!

ciaobellajciaobellajover 12 years ago
omfg!

HOT story! i'm sooooooooooooo wet lol! awesome story! the whole series is terrific!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

keep it in the family. Nice. daddys and uncles always know whats best for their little girls cunts and titties. mmmm

xbellaxxbellaxover 9 years ago
Love

this story. So hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More please!!!

Nice story. The image of the father & uncle holding her is so sexy. I am hoping that you are going to continue this story. The imagery makes me so wet. Please, please, please continue. Thanks for the fantasy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Last one was good, but the premise of this one just sucked and pissed me off, dad turning into a pimp douche, apparently having planned to let his buddy fuck her long in advance. Just turned me right off.... Right about when she said 'but daddy, I just want you.' Then he just turns into a slaver. Ugh,

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

"He opened my cervix with his thrusts." Not possible as the only time the cervix opens is in childbirth...badly written, the girl was talked about in the 3rd person by dad and uncle. Usual crap story how an immature 18yr old girl can go from a virgin to a Pro of oral and anal and DP in 1night and morning. Immature writing suggests author needs to grow up, check facts and going on the comments and how old they are, author took the hint and stopped writing. And based on these 2 stories of incest rape and then double rape with violence, goodbye!!

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