All Comments on 'The Bracelet'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Could have been good

If it wasn't so damned short! What a let down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Pathetic

A magic bracelet? The poor sex was almost as unbelievable.

Stan

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good Start

Off to a great start. Can lead to a number of things now. Can't wait for part 2,3,4,5.etc.

Thanks,

PeterGun

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Good, but could have been better

You need to get your cock out of your brain and write with some kind of intelligence. Also use a little bit of "spell-check".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More Storey

I would like to see more of this storey

C_frommnC_frommnabout 11 years ago
Great Start

To a potential series of Mind Control. I am not sure why you stopped but Please Continue.

C_frommnC_frommnover 8 years ago
Nice Start

But you leave the story Hanging. The Neighbors Daughter and maybe the Mother the Possibilities are endless. and since he can make them forget he could Impregnate women whose husbands are not doing the Job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome.

If you can I want to see the next part even if it's 13 years late

Anonymous
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