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Echoes of my Father

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by Anonymous

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by dorksicle08/09/05

Nostalgia..

Beautifully written.

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by LeBroz08/09/05

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Watch what you do and what you say,
your antics will be borne
by you kids for decades yet to come

a nice thoughtful piece

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by Syndra Lynn08/09/05

powerful!

Unfortunately I can relate all too well. thanks for putting this on paper.

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by Tathagata08/12/05

The confusion

and terror come through perfectly.
as someone else said
powerful piece.
Thank you

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by LeBroz12/05/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.



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