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ZMP ~ today's water

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by LeBroz08/10/05

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Insightful offering, as always
and glad my small thought could help
but it's easy to do when inspired
by the clear-seeing Zen of your mind

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by Lauren Hynde08/10/05

Good

Light and flowing, a little bit silly at times ("a day again dawned / as it does everyday"?) but still a notch above the norm. Keep it up.

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by Anonymous08/11/05

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a twisting current that ripples through the mind is this ZMP. Nice and flowing dear Art..
du

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by Scott N. Leavitt08/11/05

**5**

I LOVE ZMPS!!! This one is very GREAT!!! I think waves at thr beach are the same but different to!!!

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