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One mind, one body

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by Anonymous08/11/05

love it

I tried something along these line yesterday, let the
rhyme thing fuck it up. I like this lesson you have
sent us. sand

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by Anonymous08/13/05

Seek

and yea shall find. Buried deep maybe, but waiting to be released. Stepping forward, is the first step. Next, to combine the two, into one.

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