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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/12/05

I'm a sucker....

...for Art themed poems - you know that but this one's one I'd single out to hang on my wall.

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by 4degrees08/13/05

this is hot

and it turns me on.

that is all.

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by Bill Dada01/15/06

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Anna is a highly trained professional, children please do not try this at home.

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by LeBroz01/19/07

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This is all woman, about women, by a woman. Whether metaphorically or in real life behavior, this is a vision of woman unleashed ~ they're not such soft creatures, are they now?

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by duddle14602/08/07

Beautiful.

The choice of words in this rendering is almost mystical giving this a surreal feeling.

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by LeBroz02/20/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.



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by tazz31707/13/12

AN ARCHELOGICAL DIG

and tent living. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous07/13/12

THANK YOU TAZZ CAN YOU FUCK OFF NOW

OR FIND A PIECE OF PAPER TO SCRIBBLE ON

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