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These short chapters
are so amazingly annoying.
Why not write the whole thing and then post it?
She lied
Maybe that's enough for Jack to oil up the .357 and get the house wired.
The GPS in the car and a recorder.
one of them needs to find another job...but she al
already lied
Chapter is too Short
Hopefully, Jack's fuse is even shorter.
What I don't understand is how close and open she is with Jim and yet after how many years and two grown children with Jack, she is still distance...ditto..Jack...maybe the marriage was a sham...why test the marriage if there isn't one between two hearts.
Looks like even if Jack and Karen got together with Jim and Sara and discussed this matter, Jim and Karen would still feel this way...I know it is hard to believe but that's what the author essentially wrote...a fly to the flame destined to attract with consequences be damned.
'Nuff said
Andy
Setting This Up Great
I think these 2 Chapters, though short, are setting up the conflict beautifully. At this point anything can happen. Hopefully there will be some surprises.
And the .357 as in magnum, I guess, is hopefully not where you,blue88,and Jack will go. Jack and Jim seem like normal guys and have normal middle class educated reactions and feelings. Karen is a loose cannon. Will she be saved from herself? We will stay tuned.
I have no objections to short chapters but over 2 weeks between chapters is long. Maybe your email problems caused that.
I hope after the events break in this story we don't have rehashing and rehashing and the gnashing of teeth and the wringing of handkerchiefs, or the literal wringing of necks. You have to have confrontation and aftermath but I think some stories have become, at least for me, just droning on and on. Endings often seem so inferior to the beginnings. It is hard to maneuver the characters and plot into something totally believable, consistent with human nature and the situation presented, and inevitable as the outcome, and be originaland interesting to read.
I'm tired of cold fury, hard-hearts and hard-heads. It is going to be tough in this story having kind thoughts for Karen. If events play out in the expected way, it is going to be tough being sympathetic. And I'm a reader, think of what her fictional husband is thinking and feeling.
playingcardcompany
where is Chapter one?
Is there a part one? Where can i find it? when did you wirte it?
Oops
Sounds like her version and Jim's version don't actually match up. 'Just lunch?' Hope Jim is stronger than she appears to be. Too bad they did get this taken care of 20 years ago.
No hope.
I don't see much hope here. She's already lied, and knows in her heart she is going to betray the man she loves(?). Its just a matter of time and opportunity. What will be interesting, is seeing how the husband will react. I hope not violently, but decisively. Lets face it, she is going to fuck this guy. She is going to coldbloodedly choose the time and place. Does she want to stay married to her husband? Yeah, probably, but it won't matter, all she cares about right now is her lust for the other man. Sad. Of course, based on the majority of these kind of stories, on this site, the husband may roll over and play the ball less wonder. Have to wait and see.
Tim C.
Good suspence builed-up
I think you write extremely well and are doing a fine job of building up the suspence . Will Karen cheat on Jack or will she stay faithful to him? It's your story and I enjoy it, but it is a little far fetched to have a married woman with grown children and a loving husband, go wild about a man she had a crush on 20 some odd years ago. Most young women calm down at age 46 with grown children, but I look forward to reading the remaining chapters. 60 year old George
good but
She has already lied, and will cheat. the only thing going for her marriage is she feel guilty. To bad that won't stop her from ruinning her marriage and loosing her husband
Utter Fabrication
The alleged unrequited passion between the two lovers is utterly unreal and has no relation to the human condition. Failing grades would never have stopped her 25 years ago if there was one iota of truth to her fascination. That it would maintain for 25 years is absurd.
No doubt this gross fabrication will excuse her conduct in later chapters. This is the weakest and most stupid excuse for adultery that I have ever read - and that is saying a lot. These stories really do have to have some connection to the real world. How about - "she just wanted some strange cock?" Oh! That wouldn't work for this unimaginative writer.
cheating wife
I think he should start to follow her and then fix the ass hole Jim Belsen.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
Very Nice Buildup
Where it is going is kind of obvious but we are doing a very
fine ballet of words here. The feelings must attack all people after a while.
Make up your mind
Is it Belson or Belsen?
It's A Slow Read
But interesting thanks for sharing.
GIVE HER A LITTLE ROPE
she will either trip up or strangle. TK U MLJ LV NV
Loving it
The ease at which this wife broaches the subject of cheating is frightening.
SCHOOL DAYS THE OLD FASHIONED SCHOOL DAZE
what is to become of what wasn't, TK U MLJ LV NV
I don't believe this bullshit
They may have an attraction for each other; but they are not out of control. They have free will like all of us. If they "lose control" it is their choice, a selfish, destructive choice, but their decision.
A Burr In The Setup
The reason for the unrequited passion of yesteryear between Karen and Jim could have been elaborated with a little more shadow and less light to give it better believability. Given the conditions one hardly thinks there would have been much to prevent a "penetration event".
The other thing is the 25 years. Maybe after ten years, but after a whole lifetime of child rearing, this that and the other thing, wifey isn't going to have a complete pussy earthquake when so and so shows up. Given all of the time, it strains credibilty. On the other hand, it doesn't exactly spoil the tension, which is great. Bravo, Blue!
One thing is for sure: if hubby Jack discovers his own wife's wild-eyed biological response to ol' Jim it could easily wreck the marriage if something happens between them.
If she were to slip and fess up with serious remorse and restitution of some sort, she could possibly be forgiven. But if her excitability and passion for her old lover comes out, it might put Jack over the edge into territory "D".
Finding out after all these years that you are actually second string in the passion department would be a decisive kick in the balls for sure.
Jim sounds somewhat more reasoned than Karen. She sounds, uh, quite a bit flighty.
I read this two years ago and can't remember what happens!!
Another read
Great way of getting all perspectives and filling in the background. Five stars.
1*
fag cuck shit.
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