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by LeBroz08/12/05

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You are waaay too good;
the set-up is divine,
leaving us exposed;
to that last line ~
what a kicker!!

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by Anonymous08/13/05

so much

words of resonation here...how many have gone through this door...and you make them remember...and sigh just for the exerience...thanks..bluerains

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by RhymeFairy08/13/05

Straight Shooter ~

Love the way this poem
just flows .. smooth an silky.
Then Whammmoo ~ Straight shootin
from the hip gurl ~!! Love it ~!!

More Please ~!!

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