As always, your words whisk me to new places, and even into different times. The choice of your photos works to enhance each poem in this series. Excellent.
are just breath taking..as the words are too..they would make a nice table top book to peruse...enjoyed...bluerains
is lovely. No "s" on "toward." I love the way you break the line that ends with "the sea."
This series really should be in a book. I'd even buy the book. :)
I like the literary creations, and enjoyed the sea rock and sand (begining) the best so far. As a series this is a very good set.
Beautiful, moody images in words and picture. This series is definitely book-worthy. *Lining up behind Evie*
This series has been a delight to watch develop, and this is a wonderful conclusion.
Thank you, Lauren!
This final piece in the series
So symbolic with the photo automatically assumed of the sun setting;
Which here now speaks on so many levels.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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