I soooo get this.
Wonderfull wording and imagery.
What a sad place to be huh.
Huggs to you my friend ~!!
Chin up ... Anything is possiable ~!!
* Smiles *
"would you be astonished
to feel lanced wounds
of knowing cut flowers never bloom".... could any verse be as bitter sweet as this, my my my , ... what a thought this leaves,... in awe... sweetGApeaches...
nice wording and alluring write, sprinkled with the haze of blue poetry
Of the two nonerotic revelation pieces,
This has a harder, darker feel
That even my Double Fudge Chocolate pudding cannot soften.
brung into the present. TK U MLJ LV NV
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