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I really liked this
and read it several time, each time taking something different away from it. Thanks.
Passionate ~!!
yet raw passion
its emotive drive
casting contradictions
of this dilemma
as I follow pied piper's
rivers of corruption
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My fav. lines.
A deep and sorrowful look
into passion. Love the dark weave
you have sown into this cryptic poem.
Sadness comes poring out. Love this one too.
DAYUM!!!!!!!!
'and i leave traces of yet, another cup of regret .. follow me too... another trace of the blu.. very well written , DAYUM !! again ! ...... sweetGApeaches
blue
blew a trumpete and revolations I always enjoy your writes...
AND FOR ALL THOSE EXERTIONS
what will the benefits be, TK U MLJ LV NV
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