All Comments on '2 rivers, sound, and sea'

The images that come to mind with this piece! And I really like your play on words throughout the poem. I liked this verse especially:

I had a harmonic rhythm

a vibration along my deck

energizing their souls

electrical ballet of lust to come

"Harmonic rhythm, vibration, energizing, electrical"....the words build on one another and describes the mood/moment so well.

very cool title, draws you in. I too like your use of language in this piece. I especially liked this, especially that first line. Nice work Sandy-as

"Sunset would find a cove"

I was washed stem to stern

Below they would love one another

as I tacked at anchor

holding them through the night

I Love this poem.

Very evoctaive, sensual... Feeling ~!!

Great imagery that just pulls you in.

Almost as if you have joined in and let go ...

Loved it ~!!

I enjoy your wording spice in this poem <grin> nice write

a place of great memory...and a bittersweet loss of something good with a sigh...

thanks sand..always love your tales...smiles...blue

Nice picture you paint here;

But 'zephyr'?

Not a word you hear too often;

The most significant usage to which

I was exposed happened many years ago ~

Grade 6 vocabulary & spelling lesson.

Sounds and images go together to form a very beautiful delicate rendering. A little Poetic Gem!

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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fond memories and you captured it well.

and maybe to remember, TK U MLJ LV NV