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Wow!
The images that come to mind with this piece! And I really like your play on words throughout the poem. I liked this verse especially:
I had a harmonic rhythm
a vibration along my deck
energizing their souls
electrical ballet of lust to come
"Harmonic rhythm, vibration, energizing, electrical"....the words build on one another and describes the mood/moment so well.
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very cool title, draws you in. I too like your use of language in this piece. I especially liked this, especially that first line. Nice work Sandy-as
"Sunset would find a cove"
I was washed stem to stern
Below they would love one another
as I tacked at anchor
holding them through the night
Raging ... yet Tranquil ~
I Love this poem.
Very evoctaive, sensual... Feeling ~!!
Great imagery that just pulls you in.
Almost as if you have joined in and let go ...
Loved it ~!!
nice write
I enjoy your wording spice in this poem nice write
sound like
a place of great memory...and a bittersweet loss of something good with a sigh...
thanks sand..always love your tales...smiles...blue
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Nice picture you paint here;
But 'zephyr'?
Not a word you hear too often;
The most significant usage to which
I was exposed happened many years ago ~
Grade 6 vocabulary & spelling lesson.
Beautiful
Sounds and images go together to form a very beautiful delicate rendering. A little Poetic Gem!
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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Sailing on the open waters... brings back
fond memories and you captured it well.
IF A BOAT COULD SPEAK
and maybe to remember, TK U MLJ LV NV
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