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Interesting of a sort
I don't know if I liked it or not but it was a fun read. Try it and you might find it enjoyable. Thanks for the story.
As a woman, you should know better
Rape is never justified. Especially when her only "crime" is being "shallow." You could have gone in many directions with the basic premise of revenge: have him seduce all her (female) friends and show them such a great time in bed that they have to rave about him, making her aware of what she missed; have him invite all of her friends to a prestigious ball or event, but exclude her; shower them with other largesse from his new post; or all of the above. Making her realize what she passed up after she had it is a far better revenge, anyway, and perhaps more likely to contribute to the character's eventual growth.
Instead, you chose to write a story about a venal, despicable act and call it justified. Too bad I can't vote it lower than 1.
Absolutely delightful!
Absolutely delightful! With a loving husband who shares the same “condition”, it is the first time I see it addressed so tastefully and so powerfully arousing. And since he is the only man who has known me sexually, I have often wondered and had the most intense fantasies about how other such men perform and how other women learn to enjoy their totally unique endowment and prowess. More, please, Goldeniangel.
(Mrs.) Stacey Adriana
Absolutely delightful!
Absolutely delightful! With a loving husband who shares the same “condition”, it is the first time I see it addressed so tastefully and so powerfully arousing. And since he is the only man who has known me sexually, I have often wondered and had the most intense fantasies about how other such men perform and how other women learn to enjoy their totally unique endowment and prowess. More, please, Goldeniangel.
(Mrs.) Stacey Adriana
A Great Start
A superb start of a story with a lot of potential, as only Goldeniangel knows how to do. As a loving couple who share this condition, we fully comprehended what was happening and could only read but a few lines before getting aroused over and over again. Our night ended with an exceptionally intimate and passionate lovemaking. (Thanks, love!)
A lot of imagination accompanies what must have been an equal amount of research on a very novel topic. (A few details are missing here and there, but the author can only fit so much, can't she?) The author must be an incredibly HOT woman, judging by her steamy prose and her abundant attention to detail!
Joel and Stacey
Response and Review.
As a woman, you should know better
08/26/05 by Lou Nuttick in US
Rape is never justified. Especially when her only "crime" is being "shallow." You could have gone in many directions with the basic premise of revenge: have him seduce all her (female) friends and show them such a great time in bed that they have to rave about him, making her aware of what she missed; have him invite all of her friends to a prestigious ball or event, but exclude her; shower them with other largesse from his new post; or all of the above. Making her realize what she passed up after she had it is a far better revenge, anyway, and perhaps more likely to contribute to the character's eventual growth. Instead, you chose to write a story about a venal, despicable act and call it justified. Too bad I can't vote it lower than 1.
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In response,
This is a work of FICTION. Meaning that what's "Justified" changes according to the AUTHOR'S ideas. Also, don't inflict nonconstructive criticism, as it doesn't help and makes you look like a simple, immature flamer.
I loved it. 100/100 here.
Comment as shallow as the victim
Of course there is one place where "rape" is perfectly acceptable. In fiction!
Great story - love to see the underdog win - any time any place!
In response
As a woman, you should know better
08/26/05 by Lou Nuttick in US
Rape is never justified. Especially when her only "crime" is being "shallow." You could have gone in many directions with the basic premise of revenge: have him seduce all her (female) friends and show them such a great time in bed that they have to rave about him, making her aware of what she missed; have him invite all of her friends to a prestigious ball or event, but exclude her; shower them with other largesse from his new post; or all of the above. Making her realize what she passed up after she had it is a far better revenge, anyway, and perhaps more likely to contribute to the character's eventual growth. Instead, you chose to write a story about a venal, despicable act and call it justified. Too bad I can't vote it lower than 1.
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In response,
This is a work of FICTION. Meaning that what's "Justified" changes according to the AUTHOR'S ideas. Also, don't inflict nonconstructive criticism, as it doesn't help and makes you look like a simple, immature flamer.
I loved it. 100/100 here.
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Exactly. Its a fiction story. Grow up, also if this stuff offends you, don't go browsing through a category called "Mind controll". I give it a five star rating! :D
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