A Weekend Alone With My Sister

Definitions

Opaque is dense such that you cannot see through it - like a wall or sheet of steel. A shower door is typically "translucent". Some light can pass.

brings back a memory

its in need of a little editing, but its a good story. just wondering if this was something she also felt but you never got into in the story. i had a beautiful experience as well with my sister. i'm writing it now and i will have it up soon.

need

needs more to the storie

i fuck my momand sisters

i fuck my own mother and elder sisters at the same time, when my mother suck my cock my 2 sister show their cunt and ass to lick.when i fuck my mother in her pussy my sisters will show their ass to smell and lick when my mom show her tiny ass hole to lsmell lick &fuck my 2 sisters offer their wet pussys to lick i fugk my mom ahd 2 sisters and gave them children

my brothers cock

My friend told me her brother said my brother had the biggest cock in jr high.I was 12 he was 13.One day when we were alone I asked hi to show it to me.He took his clothes off .It was bigger than the neighbor man who had been fucking me for a couple months.I started playin gwith it it gone bigger and harder. I measured it .It was almostt 8 inches. I took my clothes off and layed on his bed telling him to fuck me..It was good I let him fuck me a couple times after that. Then for some reason we stopped. When I was about 30 he stopped by my house.I was laying by the pool in my bikini.I was the only one home.I saw he was getting hard. I reached up and touched it and said lets go mto my bed.We got naked.He was huge then.He ate my pussy for about 1/2 hour . He climbed between my leg and started putting it in slowly.I didn't think I could take all 10 1/2 inches of him.He started fucking me slowly . Once he was all the way in he started fucking me faster. I started comming hard. he started fucking me harderI was moaning SO BIG SO GOOD DON'T STOP. He must have fucked me for nearly an hour before cumming hard in me.We fuck at least once a week now .We are in our 60's now.I 4BAhope we live to be 100

meh.

This would have been a lot better if it was grammatically correct, and had proper spellings. A proof-reader would really help. It started off really well, but it felt like you were rushing towards the end and the actual sex was disappointing.

ages don't match

the story he sounds like he is 12-13 not 18 needs a total rewrite with more age correct actions or just delete it and post it on a site that allows underage sex.

Tense

Sort out your verb tenses; virtually none of them match right now. And the word is foetal, not fettle - that is something else entirely.

Shite

Learn to write.

nice

CONTINUE

awesome

fffuuuccckkk i loved this story make more continue!!!!!!!

Oh God

Jesus, dude. I could barely keep keep reading without laughing aloud because of your terrible grammar.

another 12 year old with a jack off fantasy!!!

More like

a ten-yo.

Juvenile Drivel

Please do this over again, edit it properly, oh, and get a grown-up to actually write it because you can't write like a grown-up, so I'm forced to believe you're not one. Grow up and get a clue if you want to be taken seriously. Minus 5, must try harder

wow

That was very hot for me, it made me dripping wet and I came twice from fingering myself wish my brother would go down on me

omg

I want a sis my age and I want this exact thing to happen

I like food

really, fucking "shower door" is a tag

Humorous Spellings

Not bad, as stories go on this site, but some of the spelling mistakes were rather hilarious, such as lying in the "fettle" position... and, for a few "minuets". It must be kind of hard to dance while lying down, even if you're feeling very fit. Come to think of it, it's a pretty good description of sex, and that's not too hard to take.

good stoty

My cum is dripping off of the ceiling

Not good

It's just not well written.

Wow

Wow

I liked it lol

Awesome

omg

you lucky bastard. "based on true events"

can we trade!?

dude thats awesome i want to try

13 years old can fuck. I did it to my aunt.

NOT BAD!! COULD USE SOME POLISHING UP TO REALLY MAKE IT SPECIAL

my sister and I where sitting (were)
in a fettle position (fetal)
wearing her small light blue (pajama bottoms )with flower design (-pajama bottoms)
her breathing became relax (relaxed)
I began to tremble and my body heat increased dramatically; however, my hand hovered centimeters above her left ass cheek and made contact and I left it there for a little bit and she didn't wake up so I got bolder and decided to feel the area where her pussy would be. (52 WORDS)
I got a little to anxious (too)
laying on her back (lying)
have the house to just my sister and (-I) (me) for a long time.
have dosed off (dozed)
took a compact from her makeup draw (drawer)
I put her mirror back and jump in bed (jumped into)
walked by my room and peak in (peeked)
pulled my finger out and lick my finger (licked)
I'm gonna fill you up Sister (, sister)
inside my sisters cunt (sister’s)
we lay there for a few minuets (minutes)

fucking hell

Fucking lucky bastard I would love to fuck my sister she's got 39ff bra .

once I fucked my sister, that was a beautiful experience.

Hmmm

I wonder if you posted ages just to show an age difference. I can't help feeling like you were younger when this actually happened. Maybe that would explain the lack of adequate grammar and spelling. I don't blame you, but in the future read your work a few times if it's short like this and if it's a long get a few people to read it too. Believe me I learned that the hard way.

Beautiful

You gave me a great idea!
Give my sister a massage.
That is the perfect excuse to feel up my sister. Then get to fuck her.
I'll just tell her they offered me a job as a masseuse, and I turned it down because I don't have anyone to practice on.
She would buy that.
Once I get my hand on her, she's fucked.