All Comments on 'A Mommy for an Orphan'

Female 45 yrs old .... I can't wait for the next part ;)

This was definately a wonderful story, most lesbian stories it's just straight sex and nothing else, but this story was different, how they developed feelings for each other. Hopefully part 2 will be soon to follow, maybe Julie makes it legal and adopts Debbie. Can't wait until the next part. Well done.

Thanks for the pleasure your story gave me - I loved how the man was brought into the action - Kay

Thanks for the pleasure your story gave me - I loved how the man was brought into the action - Kay

very good, could of been better you kind if ruin it for me when you brought a guy intoyhe story.why didn't you make it another woman who saw them? kind of made no sense to bring a man into a lesbian story.if you do another chapter tekk how big debbie and julie tits are and add a coulpe more pages. keep the guys out of the story at least the sex parts just doesn;t make sense.

Emma,I've just finished reading all your stories. You are my kind of gal. You leave me hot and horny and I can't wait for my girl to get home! Looking forward to more from you! Ken

hey i loved your story but why did you have to put men into it? it was totally hot but leave the dudes out of it

with this story i have now read all of your submissions. i had to read them after seeing your information. you are a lovely woman but your outward beauty is exceeded by a truly base, vile filthy dirty mind. you have to dortiest collection of stories especially for a woman. i am entranced by you. it excites me to think there is another person letr alone a wopman, who harbors such filthy thopughts and verbalizes so effectively it is unthinkasble that i will never get to fuck you or to suck your juices from your body. it is thinkable that weill wil;l never get to pur my hot cum down your throat or fill your cunt and ass. it is almost unbelivable how man times i will cum looking at your picture. if you can imagine a man as filthy as you and what i could do to you, i hope your fingers are working in your hot wet cunt right now imagining my cum running down your throat. you are magnifocent.

a really worthwhile story... there are a few syntax errors ... these would disappear if you used the services of an editor... loved it ... more, more, more

More more more

awesome story. so very hot and horny. pity it was written so long ago.

would have love more parts of this brilliant story.

O M G This Was So HOT ! It's been A 1/2 hr Since I

Finished Reading And I Was So Wett That I Had To . . .

I Wish You Would Write More Lesbian Themed Stories

Kisses

I can't believe that nobody has not asked for a continuation!

A story in the Lesbian section is expected to be about two females which this story started out to be but suddenly, just as the story started getting interesting we're switched at a red light to a story about a man with a long dong. What story would you continue? The lesbian story of a woman and a girl or let the woman marry the long dong or (gasp) a threesome which could be named A Mommy and A Daddy for an Orphan which might have to go to the Group section.

God u seem to have aknack that makes ur story seem real. I shall try to read more of ur stories.This one turned me on even though im male.Always respect a woman who is forthright an confident.What other stories would u recomend. Alps743@yahoo.com

Keep this story going. It really needs further exploration

would love to read more of this story

it's really good. you should keep writing. :-)

I am not a category purist but this just annoys me... If you are going to add a dick to the story then put it in Erotic Coupling ... or save the last few paragraphs for a different chapter. Up till then I enjoyed it.

Very hot story. You need to continue on and go into more detail between Julie and Debbie. Some other characters besides the guy might be fun too. Maybe Debbie seduces one of the other soccer girls and Julie secretly watches or something. But please continue.

Nice buildup and very sexy and hot. However, bringing the dude into the story cooled it off as Julie is into Debbie so much, why in gods name would she want to maybe ruin the relationship by having sex with a guy. Keep the guy out and have Julie take Debbie's virginity herself with a strapon, Now that would be hot....

More chapters.

We would all love to hear about Debbie and the stranger with Mommie looking on

It could have been a love story, albeit through sex. Unfortunately you added a male to this when I was in the mood and enjoying the lesbian aspect of it.

Adding the cock totally ruined it for me!

Great up until the cock appeared.

Why in the hell did you put this under lesbian sex??

HELL NO. I'M READING ABOUT LESBIAN ENCOUNTERS NOT BI- SEXUAL .

I score the piece 5🌟's. Guess I'll have to await your decision.

Would love to read the next chapter of this lovely story

Get rid of the cock.

That was fuckin hottt!!

My wife's pussy is about to get pounded...

Love bad girls for mommy! Thank you thank you!!

Lesbians. No cock unless its strapon. Get rid of the dude completely!!! Then continue the story