by normique
I have always believed erotice poetry wasnt hot, and probably best served as stimulation. But, this has the necessary imagery and hot language to do the trick for me. came nicely to it, at its peak.. Thanks for writing.
Bernie
I don't usally mess with poems, but this one left me hard!
I got a kick out of this! I got carried along with the emotions and action and I laughed in places and smiled all the way through.